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editing

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ter·​ra (noun): of the earth

form (noun): configuration, manifestation

edit·ing (verb): to prepare for publication

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Line-edit

You've nailed your messaging and overall structure.  Now it's time to focus on readability—we want your readers to be immersed in your storyline and stay on the page.

 

A line edit corrects and smooths your writing artfully but invisibly, eliminating distractions while retaining your style and narrative voice. Line-editing focuses on your writing at the sentence-level edits to ensure that your writing flows well.

Pricing is subject to a sample review. 

Formatting in Google Docs, Microsoft Word doc, docx or PDF

What you get

A full line-by-line edit for clarity and flow. Suggestions for changes, comments, and questions.

I will address the following: 

  • Chapter sequencing

  • Inconsistencies in style and messaging

  • Sentence pace, rhythm, and flow

  • Awkward or cliché metaphor

  • Effectiveness of sentence narration, sentence choice, repetition, and overwriting.

  • Problematic representation, stereotyping, and othering

  • Told versus shown prose

  • Use of tenses

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